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mmsiraj
Siraj M.M.
India, tamilnadu, Coimbatore

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empty handed

I am beat
bent
like a horseshoe
dead broke too
I stroke
the embers
of a distant fire
rock my boat
at midstream
and mock
those who
bless me

There is too much
acid in the head
too much arrogance
in the mood

I stand on shaky ground
bared to the bone
with my hands
loped off
at the wrists
touching
cold stone

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bounarjaf Comment by: bounarjaf - 2008-04-14 12:04
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The short lines help create a rhythm that works well with the ideas this poem conveys. The ending is strong and surprising.
MsWizard Comment by: MsWizard Online- 2008-04-04 11:32
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Wow. I feel like that daily. Stark and to the point my friend. I like it.
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