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xXLupaXx
L Baird
United States, Washington, Kent

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I dont know what this poem is about

Pink frosting leaks through
The linking logs fort

Colors fly high
With skittles falling down

And I don’t know
What this poem is about

The blue bumble bee buzzes
On its way to candy mountain

Dinosaurs dance creating cracks
In the perfect parking lot of a skating center

And I still don’t know
What this poem is about

Shiny black boots, well polished
Hot dog buns, no relish

Virtual communication with false identities
Hall passes forged by short kids missing teeth

Its amazing what can come out
Of a creatively deprived brain
(but I still dont know what this poem is about)

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metaphysicalg Comment by: metaphysicalg - 2008-05-29 00:37
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lol crazy, chaotic, sporadic, and free.. I loved it!
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