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xXLupaXx
L Baird
United States, Washington, Kent

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What is Protection?

Florescent lights buzz their hateful song
Casting harsh shadows
And reflecting off clean whiteboards

Barred windows and locked doors
Denying freedom to those who seek it
They say its to keep others who would hurt us out
But I know the truth
They’re keeping us in
To protect them

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xXLupaXx Comment by: xXLupaXx - 2008-06-28 16:22
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ahh, whoops. i didnt mean to post it as a screenplay >.<
Mortelle Comment by: Mortelle - 2008-06-28 13:23
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It's eerie, but good.

But I don't see how it is a screenplay.

@)----
persilla ann Comment by: persilla ann - 2008-04-03 21:49
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i love this work,it's very original
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