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Comment by: DavidHe Online- 2008-04-04 03:29
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Very good write! I like the last stanza very very much: You can take the girl
Out of the dirt
But you cant take the dirt
Out of the girl
Carry on! Best wishes |
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Comment by: DavidHe Online- 2008-04-04 03:29
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Very good write! I like the last stanza very very much: You can take the girl
Out of the dirt
But you cant take the dirt
Out of the girl
Carry on! Best wishes |
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Comment by: DavidHe Online- 2008-04-04 03:26
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Very good write! I like the last stanza very very much: You can take the girl
Out of the dirt
But you cant take the dirt
Out of the girl
Carry on! Best wishes |
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| I like this. It's simple, it has a nice rythmn and there is a nice wee ryhmne (i can't spell it) here and there. I also like the repetition at the end with the play on a commonly used phrase :) |
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