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skypoetone
Tony Downing
United Kingdom, NE Lincolnshire, Somewhere in North East Lincs

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Lonely as a Clown

Lonely as a Clown
(A play on Wordsworth’s “I Wondered Lonely as a Cloud”)

I wandered lonely as a clown
Who felt so high on narcotics and pills
Then all at once I furrowed a frown,
A ghost of golden foothills;
Abide with past, o’er seas,
Prancing I flounder to my knees.

Conspicuous are these tears of brine
And sprinkle in the same old way,
They fell like Benedictine
Along the corridors of time:
Ten rivers converged, it seems by chance
Taken the hand of pain to dance.

I ventured no further.

2002

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xxkrowxx Comment by: xxkrowxx - 2008-07-29 11:42
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i like it... very haunting :)
bebelestrange Comment by: bebelestrange - 2008-07-20 11:33
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I beg to differ!:}
skypoetone Comment by: skypoetone - 2008-07-18 09:28
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Thanks B... I remember thinking the poet must have been on a different plain of existence to everyone else, I wanted to venture further but I could never be a Wordsworth. :)
bebelestrange Comment by: bebelestrange - 2008-07-18 08:46
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Great work-T...I should have read this one earlier.:(:)Bebe
skypoetone Comment by: skypoetone - 2008-06-24 09:27
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Thankyou gals, most appreciated. :)
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