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pinzerino
Lynsey Neilson
United Kingdom, Scotland- a country, not a state, not a province

Words: 21
Access: Public
Comments: 3

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Form

Drip
Drip
Drip

Then
Rip
Rip
Rip

I am

Snip
Snip
Snip
I am melting
I am torn
I am nothing

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Sam S Sterling Comment by: Sam S Sterling - 2008-04-12 09:09
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It looks quite appealing as it is. Ive done form pieces on here before but they sometimes come out mangled up when I post them. :-(
pinzerino Comment by: pinzerino - 2008-04-04 14:30
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no idea, i was just playing about with form but that didn't show up when i put it up on here!
poetguyraza Comment by: poetguyraza - 2008-04-04 12:32
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How quick... Who are you talking about though??? You should use punctuation and by the way it's a great piece...

Keep up the good work

Regards
Muhammad T. Raza
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