There is Pain in Your Mentality
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There is Pain in Your Mentality
There is pain in your mentality
I can see it in your eyes babe
They shine forth glitter and spew
Wet lines
Cutting through the dust on your stalled inaction plan
They also shine anger and pain an' hatred
Focused tight into intent diamonds
Bitter vitriol directed against
Your fellow man
Embrace womankind then and taste the nectar
That drives me so
Ill----------------------logically
Taste the smaller side, the calmer side, the softer hew
Musical laughter and womanscent
Abandon us brutish males, but
Give me a glass of wine and smoking stick
Give me a place to stand that I may be heard
Recognized as One in the multitude
Where I may shout, sway the braying beasts
The sluggish insect drones humanity
We can try maybe to be, you an' I
Your pain is felt in my bones too
Why you stab me with your poison pen
Why you scratch my cheek, bite my tongue
When i move to kiss you
There is pain in your mentality
I can see babe
But you got to have friends
You got to try love
Again and bear it
Wet lines black lines
Your sneering lips so beautiful
Head raised now, ready to fight
Not I my love, not I
I can see it in your eyes babe
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Comment by: MsWizard Online- 2008-04-09 21:29
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| Oh I didnt think she was a "real" person...I suppose I should have said I feel for the character in this write......I've felt that kind of pain myself and can sympathize... |
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| The woman is alright. Don't worry. She doesn't really exist. She is a composite of a few people, perhaps. Might be I was dealing with my own internal things. Might be. |
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Comment by: MsWizard Online- 2008-04-09 20:32
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I love your images of a woman scarred tarred and feathered by pain...
Women shot through with red hot venom after being torn apart...I really like this one Daniel....I feel for the woman in this write.... |
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Well written piece, I liked the clear images you have created with words. Thanks for the read.
Fureya |
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You did give me feedback. Weird it disappeared. Thanks for the comment(s).
This is not about one person in particular actually. |
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