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Comment by: DavidHe Online- 2008-06-23 17:53
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| Dear Macabre, thanks for the nice comment. I am beginning to write verses and short stories. If you like, you can read the ones posted on Editred. I would like to have more advice from you. Best wishes. |
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| ok, thank you for your comments on my poetry and i see your poetry is well written in terms of haiku structure and being written in your second language but, i would like to see what you could do with the english language outside of these restrictions. why not try stream of consciousness poetry where one writes whatever comes to their mind on the spur of the moment? you could then take out what works and what doesn't, anyways, just a suggestion, all good, keep writing :-) |
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Comment by: DavidHe Online- 2008-06-23 02:06
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| Thanks very much, Tina. I hope you could comment on more of my works. I want to learn from you. Best wishes. |
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| Hello David! I like this haiku very much! - tina |
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Comment by: DavidHe Online- 2008-06-23 00:34
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| Thanks very much for the comment, Zigzag. I will do better in writing with your help. Best wishes. |
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