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Comment by: Stefan - 2008-05-21 12:37
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| Great poem. You should see spring on my side of the world. |
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| This is very strong, and yes raw... I suggest it is a signature that will make you a fine poet. |
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| Raw and powerful. A bolt of lightning from the Pantheon. |
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Comment by: frees340 Online- 2008-04-05 12:52
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| Very raw and powerful. You have a really great command of language. I didn't see any cliches, good job! |
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Comment by: jgilgun - 2008-04-05 12:02
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| Nice. I like it. Great images. Nature raw! Exciting. |
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