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frankman
Uchenna Franklin
Nigeria, Kaduna State, Kaduna

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SPRINGTIME

These days the sun steadily proves the sky
which now conscripts war-like clouds
soon a fierce war will break out
with roars and clanks of weapons above
and drops of glassy blood below
heaven will blaze and blare
roofs and trees will rage in protest
while we
too human to observe
will hibernate into roomlets
to pray that a divine hand intervenes

but the earth will smile again
when the rains pump it with health
lawns will yield flowers
and our lungs happy sighs

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Stefan Comment by: Stefan - 2008-05-21 12:37
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Great poem. You should see spring on my side of the world.
skypoetone Comment by: skypoetone Online- 2008-04-11 11:24
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This is very strong, and yes raw... I suggest it is a signature that will make you a fine poet.
Promking007 Comment by: Promking007 - 2008-04-10 18:51
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Raw and powerful. A bolt of lightning from the Pantheon.
frees340 Comment by: frees340 Online- 2008-04-05 12:52
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Very raw and powerful. You have a really great command of language. I didn't see any cliches, good job!
jgilgun Comment by: jgilgun - 2008-04-05 12:02
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Nice. I like it. Great images. Nature raw! Exciting.
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