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kpguevarra
karlo guevarra
Philippines, national capital region, las piñas city

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Midnight Divulgence

Why do I have to end up this way
Lost the feeling, my faith, my mind
Why did you mess with my forever
When time was everything, so sweet and kind

I looked down and all that sweet scent of your rose
Tears felt my eyes and saw gleaming stars
Never felt an island away from your heart
Now I’m distraught, my heart’s behind bars

Screaming for the bliss just passing me by
Hoping for that moment that you would be mine
Reached for the hand that I held in my dreams
Withering thoughts of you so charming and fine

The moon lifts my soul and overcomes my fear
Scared of not feeling your once cold breath
But even if dread hinders me from you
I’ll always endure; I won’t wait my death

Despite my lucid discernment of the impossible
My heart still blinds me from my dark, dark reality
And my heart will perpetually be a fool for you
Because you are my past and my eternity

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Nana Comment by: Nana - 2008-04-09 07:14
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Simply excellent. This has some sort of cold and ominous tone as well as sorrowful. You have some really deep lines,
"Despite my lucid discernment of the impossible
My heart still blinds me from my dark, dark reality
And my heart will perpetually be a fool for you
Because you are my past and my eternity".
That just makes for the perfect ending.
Here's to another great read!
Sdry Comment by: Sdry - 2008-04-09 02:55
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Enjoyed reading that, well writen !
Mind having a look at some of my work ?

Sam
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