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Walker
Ramyangshu Chakraborty
India, Assam, Karimganj, Dibrugarh

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Comments: 5

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Whose soul shall remain empty?

And yet prospers those fastidious growths,
Rotten hearts, filled with mirth,
Their pleasures were mine, yet crude, it all was,
Incoherent thought sure takes its birth.

The solemn truth, that which heart binds,
That which is pure, the mind seldom finds,
The earnest cycle's forgotten ways,
In blissful tenderness, everything sways.

All was his, who chose to command,
And yet laws bound, and sanctimonious it becomes,
The kingdom restricts, the cage enslaving,
And all is lost, in its drudgerious churns.

Quivers he, whose hands were blessed,
And on his forehead, A kiss was marked.
And in that gaiety, he walked unheeded,
Was there a wish, unknowingly asked?

In the cycle of eternity, pledges are made,
And all is cursed, to perish in self-pity,
Some find right, and some get lost,
Yet, who shall die, with a soul dead empty?

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Walker Comment by: Walker - 2008-04-13 05:34
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thaks for the comments
Syl Comment by: Syl - 2008-04-09 17:15
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That had smooth flow and depth..

'drudgerious' may not be a word but it had its place in this piece..

This is definitely something i could read many times over..
Comment by: - 2008-04-08 18:18
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very fluent poem!!! great read i even like ur made up drudgerious word it'll be my new household saying
Walker Comment by: Walker - 2008-04-08 11:40
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Drudgerious is not a word.
I searched for it after I wrote the word in google. bUt, it creates its own space, and hence it stays
junenandy Comment by: junenandy - 2008-04-08 11:37
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Wow, this is very moving. I liked this:
"All was his, who chose to command,
And yet laws bound, and sanctimonious it becomes,
The kingdom restricts, the cage enslaving,
And all is lost, in its drudgerious churns."

However, I am not sure of this word 'drudger[y](ious)'but it sure gelled in the poem.

Keep up the good work.
Will come here for more such reads.
Thanks.
June
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