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timeakinga
Timea Kinga Szűcs
Romania, Timisoara

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Pushing you away

Let’s dream about falling
And wake up before hitting the ground
Listen to the echoes
Of screams carried by zephyr around

Now dance to the rhythm
Of the music bonding us this close
Be my innocent habit
Babe, be my failed-jaded overdose

Trust your intuition,
Our youth is an erratic charade
Love’s folie à deux
Invented in a secret escape

Fade in obscurity
Oblivion solves the mysteries
I won’t try to find you
My flashlight is out of batteries

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Wildefriend Comment by: Wildefriend - 2008-05-10 17:00
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You obviously have quite a command of the language, and an eye and ear for the rhythm of the lines. I really like:

Babe, be my failed-jaded overdose

That's wonderful!
fallenxstar Comment by: fallenxstar - 2008-04-07 18:45
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I really like this! very nice! thank you for sharing!
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