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Mikey220
Michael Boire
Canada

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Heart Floating In A Hot Tub

The steam of the jacuzzi,
Adds a sensible allure to the moment.
It's almost staged, unreal.

My heart surprised me,
It thrust me into a new romantic situation.
It beats swiftly, I'm afraid.

The water treads to the side,
As she makes her way towards me.
The butterfly's in my stomach begin to dance.

Ripples released from her floating pace,
Her hand grabs mine.
She spins and slowly sits on my lap.

Now I wait,
Scared and curious.
I long for her kiss yet dread the consequences.

The closer we got,
The more excited I became.
Is this right?

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MitchellNoel Comment by: MitchellNoel - 2008-04-30 23:42
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It seems right to me. Unless it's your sister...then, not so right.

Good job! savour these moments. You miss them when you are older. Nothing beats teen love/lust.
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