writing community
Sign In Here | Lost Password | FREE Sign Up
E-mail: Password:
Remember login  
The place for writers:
Upload your writing in minutes, receive peer feedback from other writers, poets, authors, then get your work published out there in the real world.       Learn how other writers are doing it.

 
GraceyLou
Grace Hays
United States, Louisiana, Ruston

Words: 94
Access: Public
Comments: 2

Forward to a friend
Print Version
E-mail this writer E-mail this user 
View Author profile
Add to Readers  




~~~Bubbles~~~

So sweet and kind
a smile for all
You have such a sweet
and gentle attitude
A very bubbly and bright
outlook on things
A giggle here and there
when you hear a joke
Sometimes a giggle
just because you are so happy
You are a good friend
sunny disposition and all
There are times when
I want to call you giggles
But you will always
be known as Bubbles
Though I believe
that is due to
You having and bubbling
over with lots of love

(written 4/5/08 for my friend/coworker J-Dub aka Bubbles)

Want to comment on this Poetry?
Sign up to Edit Red and you will be able to comment on Poetry and get access to: Upload your own stories and poems, get readers and their feedback, promote your work...
Sign up






[Back to top]
Comments  
DavidHe Comment by: DavidHe Online- 2008-04-09 17:18
Add to Readers
      
A very good poem. You show your true feelings for your friend, which can delight more readers. Best wishes.
ParchmentPoetry Comment by: ParchmentPoetry - 2008-04-08 20:28
Add to Readers
      
Nice - but a couple of typos.
3rd line - SUCH.
Also, "There times when" sounds like it should be "There are times when"
1

Sponsored Ads


By GraceyLou

Featured Writers

Advertising - Terms & Conditions - Short Story Submissions - Contact - Writing Competitions - Writing Links - Book Promotion - Sky-Tribe.com - alanemmins.com
  Member short stories, poems, comments and other contributions are owned by the poster.
Copyright 2003 - 2007 Edit Red I/S