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kpguevarra
karlo guevarra
Philippines, national capital region, las piñas city

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Whispers

You whispered in my ear
like the morning breeze I feel
you said you've liked me everyday
and you knew this love was so real

I whispered back at you
I whispered with all my heart
I said I've loved you everyday
and I pray that we'll never part

I saw your soft cheeks blush
you felt my smile so tender
you reached your hand to mine
and our love felt like forever

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Sam S Sterling Comment by: Sam S Sterling - 2008-04-14 04:12
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A very nice image with well constructed rhyme scheme.
Istari97 Comment by: Istari97 - 2008-04-13 13:16
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Wonderful capturing of a moment in life that is typically too abstract for words. Great work.
menoh Comment by: menoh - 2008-04-10 17:58
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I feel the passion, the the thrill of a love like this, those moments treasured, especially those before a first kiss. I love this piece.
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