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MsWizard
Alicia Wizard
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United States, WA, Seattle

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Call Me Baby (revised)

whisper to me in the dark
tell me that you care
touch me sweetly
hold me close
make me feel you're there
let me call you little names
loving, soft and true
cause if you let me whisper
baby
then maybe you'll surrender ...
to my wistful
quiet
unspoken plea....
and call me baby too...

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MsWizard Comment by: MsWizard Online- 2008-06-16 06:45
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Oh Brokenwing, that's a great like "Butter melting on hot toast"....!
brokenwing Comment by: brokenwing - 2008-06-16 06:16
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Very sweet... words like butter melting on hot toast.
MsWizard Comment by: MsWizard Online- 2008-04-13 01:14
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Thank you Matt...
mattarnold Comment by: mattarnold - 2008-04-12 13:08
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very pure and tender...love the last part:

if you let me whisper “baby”
then maybe you'll surrender ...
to my quiet and unspoken plea ...
and call me “baby“ too...
MsWizard Comment by: MsWizard Online- 2008-04-12 10:02
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Thank you....*smiling*
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