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Al A Moan
angela riesterer
New Zealand, Northland, Whangarei

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Mission Achieved (Rap Song)

I believe it indeed
recognise it
memory retrieved
never disguise it
MISSION ACHIEVED!

Don't dare defy it,
or even deny it,
don't you lie about it,
fake a cry about it,
MISSION ACHIEVED!

Do the big sigh about it.
You got no idea about it.
That aint my style -
I'm not on your file.
MISSION ACHIEVED!

Package received
Don't be deceived
There's more up my sleeve
than you'll ever conceive
MISSION ACHIEVED!

Believe what you believe
It feels like Christmas eve
Take your time unwrapping...
now it's all happening
MISSION ACHIEVED!

I am the master.
I do it faster.
I can last longer
and you know I am stronger
I said STRONGER not stranger!
I'm not the one in danger -
I say don't worry be happy,
even when things are crappy.


It was not my aphrodisiac,
that is still intact!
You know what I say -
it's a fact.
I suggest you just do it
Get over it ang get through it
Cause you just blew it
Boy - you slew it!
Hack it and crack it
Pick it and pack it
MISSION ACHIEVED!

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DavidHe Comment by: DavidHe - 2008-07-03 05:09
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A very good song full of emotion. I hope you can comment on my works as often as you like. I want to learn from you. Best wishes.
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