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Sdry
Samuel De Rycke
Belgium, Oost-Vlaanderen, Wetteren

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Lin and me

my mind up side down,
my heart beyond control

the game is hers to play
the outcome hers to decide

a puppet changing course at every word she says
time so meaningless without her

longing for her love so sweet
in hopes and dreams my fairy-tale exists

in life and world i'm yet to enter,
that closed heart of her

love without an answer
pain instead of joy
only time will tell
where our story ends

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JayBean Comment by: JayBean - 2008-04-17 01:45
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Ahhh, the ache of loving someone and not having it returned. many can associate with your heartfelt poems.

"in hopes and dreams my fairy-tail exists" - spelling error, should be fairy "tale"

thanks for sharing

cheers JB
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