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"A house like no other
where nymphets frolick
in your enchanted gardens
and troubadours sing
of chivalry
and the coming of spring
with all your latticed windows
and passionate doors
that lead to chambers
cast in ethereal light
on wine soaked nights
with stolen kisses
under heavenly stairways
that lead to the stars..."
So beautiful...just lovely.... |
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Comment by: phillmag Online- 2008-04-14 16:57
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i really like: with all your latticed windows/ and passionate doors.
my only crit: caps on Whitman. |
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| Very sensual. Enjoyed reading. Keep writing more. Loved the imagery. |
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| I enjoyed the way you intertwined a description of romantic love with visionary and spiritual threads. I look forward to reading more of your work. |
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