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jgilgun
Jane Gilgun
United States, Minnesota, Minneapolis

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A Tear

I feel like a robot, she said.
I want to talk about my sorrow,
but I feel so mechanical.
She sat silent.
She held a cigarette in her left hand.
I watched the ash grow and arch downward.
As she was about to cry,
the ash fell to the floor and shattered.
A tear.

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DavidHe Comment by: DavidHe Online- 2008-06-09 05:56
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A deep feeling expressed in such a short poem! You are expert on it! Best wishes.
jgilgun Comment by: jgilgun - 2008-04-14 18:50
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Thank you. This moment has stayed with me.
Jorbian Comment by: Jorbian - 2008-04-14 18:45
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It is lovely.
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