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You´re making me lonely
you´re making me weak
you´re making me see
it´s crazy to speak
you´re making me suffer
you´re making me bleed
you´re making me loose
my energy
you´re making me foolish
you´re making me wrong
you´re making me see
that´s all I´ve been taught
but, you´re making a lie
you´re making a crime
you´re making me see
it´s time to deny
stop taking my time
confusing my mind
you´re making me seem
like I´m a lost child
I won´t take no more
I won´t act this way
you´re making me see
this is a mad game
I need to come clear
I need to be sure
you´re making me see
this is a cold war
I need a new life
I need a new home
you´re making me see
that´s what I long for
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very nice write! i found a mistake in the 6th stanza though, "I want take no more" I'm guessing it should say "I won't..." thank you for sharing this, a part of me is in the same boat as you have shown in this poem. really hit home. thanks again for sharing!
