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milner place
Milner Place
United Kingdom, West Yorkshire, Huddersfield

My Bookshop
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man about town

in the band of his trilby
the pin feather
of a snipe

always

the hat within reach
the feather varnished
by smoke of many bars
even though
infrequently
washed in rain dried
in the airs of alley-ways

then the feather
still beat at the wind
then the snipe
still flew
with zig-zagged flight

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milner place Comment by: milner place - 2008-04-17 03:48
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Thanks David. Like your Haikus very much.

Good to meet you

Milner
milner place Comment by: milner place - 2008-04-17 03:43
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Thanks Sophia, it's good to be back. Hope to be on more regularly again now. Going to be a bit busy with promotion of a new publication in May. If you want a look at that (even hear some of it) you can go to http://www.fluxgallerypress.co.uk/events.htm and scroll dowwn to May 10th and there's Odersfelt.

Cheers

Milner
DavidHe Comment by: DavidHe Online- 2008-04-16 18:02
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Very good read! This poem is well written. I appreciate it very much. Best wishes
Sophia Comment by: Sophia - 2008-04-16 09:30
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Nice to see you back! It's always such a pleasure to read your poems, and this is no exception. It has a lovely crisp rhythm and your usual wonderful descriptions.
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