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vanessaniki
Lady Bug
United States, Ca, La Puente

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Mi Cielo

Mi Cielo
Me tomas allí

Elevándome con tu sonrisa
Me levanto y estoy en tu presencia
Mi luz, mi mundo, mi cielo

Recogiste mi corazón de la tierra
Y con tus manos rotas
Lo arrojaste al cielo
Donde se pudo elevar alto con las mariposas


El tiempo se paró en seco cuando estaba contigo
Pero de alguna manera se logió volar
¿Cómo puede ser?
Nunca titubearé otra vez

Sólo tengo que mirarte a los ojos
Me ahogo más y más profundo
Porque caí hacia tí tan alta
Mi vida mi tierra, mi cielo

~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~

Lifting me up with your smile
I arise and I am in your presence
My light, my earth, my sky

You picked my heart off the ground
And with your own broken hands
Threw it to the heavens
Where it could soar with the butterflies

Time stood at a halt when I was with you
But somehow managed to fly
How can this be?
I will never question again

I have only to look to your eyes
I drown deeper and deeper
Because I fell into you so high
My life, my world, my sky

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Sam S Sterling Comment by: Sam S Sterling - 2008-04-16 02:23
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Oh dumb me! I started trying to work out an imperfection translation in my head, then scrolled down and noticed that you'd provided it anyway LOL.A very nice string of images and feelings here.
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