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Sdry
Samuel De Rycke
Belgium, Oost-Vlaanderen, Wetteren

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Lin , goodbye

In silence his heart would cry
broken by his own foolish mind

meaningless, so meaningless
however could he become more to her

only a single tear would slip out
before his heart closed down

suppressing, hiding, locking it all away
how ever could he be so weak

to fall in love
with a girl he could never have

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MsWizard Comment by: MsWizard Online- 2008-04-20 09:40
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This is so beautiful....so sweetly sad.....a sadness we have all unfortunately engaged in at one time in our lives.....lovely write my friend...just lovely...
fallenxstar Comment by: fallenxstar - 2008-04-16 18:02
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aww very sweet. I think a lot of us know this feeling all too well, including myself. thanks for sharing.
JayBean Comment by: JayBean - 2008-04-16 06:11
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heah thanks for sharing!

cheers Jelly bean
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