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milner place
Milner Place
United Kingdom, West Yorkshire, Huddersfield

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Gonsalvo and the necessary illusions

Blood has the colour of a rose, pain
that of a white swan in a storm.
Green smells of horses in the dawn,
olives at sunset. We need the mask,
the song, gate to the next field,
slide of lips, love’s orchestra,
companionship of wine.

A lot of gods get lost along the way,
but still the stars are friendly, rivers
worm through reed beds, glide
to a sea, that as the earth turns
in its melody, kisses the red mouth
of the sun.

We know that life is tooth and claw,
write poems for the hawk and wolf.
We’ve urns for pain, terror, loss, shame,
butter for the balm of burns.
It must be wise to build on joy,
relish the frenzy of a gale, listen
to wanton music, dance with a duende,
silver the tolling of the bell.

The sword’s made noble,
garottes of silk.
Soil fertilised by gore
is sown with lies.

¡Por dios! As the years
leaf down the calendars,
the rotten grapes
get thrown to rats,
memories that smell of blood
get chucked in the garbage cart.

We need to drink
Chiclana wine, remember
the flower
behind a dancer’s ear,
the songs she sang
with stamping feet,
clawed beauty
out of anger and despair.

We learn to dream
while sleeping
and awake,
must teach our hands
to knead, must bake
illusionary bread
to live

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milner place Comment by: milner place - 2008-04-20 02:40
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Hi Rabab. Thanks for the compliment.I like to think that poetry can have a big part to play in the balancing act between reality and illusion that is so important to our sanity. Maybe, that's just another illusion! But it has become a necessary one for me, at least.

Milner
rabableo Comment by: rabableo - 2008-04-19 21:53
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Yes, I agree, "We need the mask". It is very difficult to exist, let alone live, without these illusions. I like how you call them "necessary illusions". I see a pattern in the lines getting shorter as the poem moves forward and becomes shortest, albeit hardest, at the very end.

A thought provoking piece that I enjoyed reading and which reminded me of why I like poetry. Thank you.
milner place Comment by: milner place - 2008-04-19 09:29
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Thanks Kevin. A bit hard that tha best may be in the very beginning, but that can be the way of the world too, in so many things.

milner
bounarjaf Comment by: bounarjaf - 2008-04-19 09:02
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I enjoyed the images in tis poem. My favorite were the descriptions of the colors in the first stanza.
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