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FantasticFantasy
Raven Coleman
United States, North Carolina, Hole in the Wall

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a short poem for my parents "graybar hotel"

My real parents;
I live with them.

I need no explanation,
they have been there for me,
even if i'm their grandchild.

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bebelestrange Comment by: bebelestrange - 2008-04-21 20:48
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of course you know i'm incredibly bias being your like my little bro' -this is by far one of my favs-ma&pops band incorp.
in it- way cool luuuvvved it!!!!!!!!!!This band was of course one I remember-they had that cool eqiup.room set up in the old house.i was too young to go that round.you have such an old soul-i think you probably were there!
Loloix Comment by: Loloix - 2008-04-20 03:48
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the last line is epiphanic...

i felt a tingling sensation in my nape after reading it..

wohh!!
menoh Comment by: menoh - 2008-04-19 23:37
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short, powerful. you pack a lot of sentiment in such few words, which is hard to do...
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