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FantasticFantasy
Raven Coleman
United States, North Carolina, Hole in the Wall

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Me

I am short.
I am 15 years old,
and a fatty-patty.
I like cartoons.
My hair is long.
But one day
my hair will be gone,
and I'll still be short and like cartoons.

My eyes are hazel
and I have crooked teeth.
But one day,
my teeth won't be crooked
and my eyes will still be
hazel.

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FantasticFantasy Comment by: FantasticFantasy - 2008-04-21 15:39
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well... 230 lbs is fat, jewel.
and I'm short for a guy, only 5' 8"
deathrite Comment by: deathrite - 2008-04-21 10:40
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you idiot!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
you are not a fatty patty!!!!!!!!!!!
try being 5'2" one day and then you won't see yourself as fat!!!!!!!!!1
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