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Those tanned thighs
Underwear snug
Over tight ass,
And stomach chiseled
By effort,
Makes me yearn
To be
Your carbon copy.
My thighs unshaped,
Legs skinny and
Butt hanging, sagging,
Without effort,
Makes me yearn
To change
Or kill myself,
Whichever comes easier.
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Nice descriptions. I think it is important for people to know that Self-consciousness isn't just from women. Men feel it too, and I'm glad that you addressed it. (I don't think anyone can say it better)
