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menoh
Antonio Beardall
Belize, Cayo, San Ignacio,

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Hater

Condescending
Glances,
Projecting
Importance,
Downward
Snickering,
Reflecting
Ignorance,
Floating
Stride,
Sullied
Soul,
Back
Stabber,
Ass
Hole.

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Danahfaren Comment by: Danahfaren - 2008-04-23 02:34
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Simple but very effective. Well done!
Stephyblue Comment by: Stephyblue - 2008-04-21 14:03
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ahhh... takes me back to high school. I would love to copy this about a hundred times and mail it to all those people I used to know.

I like the rhyme scheme at the end:

Sullied
Soul,
Back
Stabber,
Ass
Hole.

Great, fun read.
brokenwing Comment by: brokenwing - 2008-04-21 05:54
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Very effective, if somewhat disturbing, but then, I think that may have been the point!
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