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Dan Sheridan
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United Kingdom, Surrey, Guildford

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Tell It, Like It Is

I know your finding it difficult to tell me how your feeling,
I just can't get you out of my mind, remembering back to the day
In Tina's flat, blasting out Lionel Richie and co.
Singing our hearts out - whilst dancing on the ceiling.

I'm finding it difficult to be without you, since the words we both said.
I'm left dumbstruck, and wondering what avenues if any, are left to pursue
You've touched me in a place that no-one else can reach,
I need to tell you like it is, whatever this is, I know deep down we will always be true!

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brokenwing Comment by: brokenwing Online- 2008-05-01 06:06
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Nicely expresses the need for closure and communication in a relationship.
Comment by: - 2008-04-22 11:26
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Aw, it's always so difficult to be without the one we love. Your poem beautifully relates that as most of us has felt that same emotion at least once.

My best to you
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"Love Life, Lust Life"

by Dan Sheridan



Love Life, Lust Life
Romantic Poetry
ISBN: 1413748554

Inspiration for the book came in many forms, starting out with the trials and tribulations of young adulthood to those of love and romance.

Love Life, Lust Life

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