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FantasticFantasy
Raven Coleman
United States, Wishin' I was in, Japan

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Unrequited

Between us-
an empty space.
Filled with your Boyfriend.

Between us-
a friendship.
Not a strong one,
but still a friendship.

Between us-
Inside us-
With us-
Inside us.

An unrequited love.

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jcp200817 Comment by: jcp200817 - 2008-04-23 15:19
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This one is nicely written, I like how you compare the boyfriend as an empty space, we all know that many of use have felt the same way.
Somnius Comment by: Somnius - 2008-04-22 20:39
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You have form. I like that.
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