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ThePenguin
Peter Budvietas
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New Zealand, Auckland

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Warning signs?

“Death – The Devil – Gloria Mundi," the tarot reader said, turning over the three cards - change, violence, triumph.

How was I to know, that turning left instead of right would lead to the mugger, that my quick upper cut to his jaw would lead to headlines in the national papers and glory for ending the career of a serial killer?

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ThePenguin Comment by: ThePenguin Online- 2008-04-30 18:09
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Karen: call it "dyslexia" or finger problems. Will fix!
Lez: the meaning depends on the interpretation (and the orientation). The cards could mean something very different from the simple schematic here.
nadinesellers Comment by: nadinesellers - 2008-04-30 16:00
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life segmented, chopped, narrowed. it's all there, cauht between reality and imagination.
karjon Comment by: karjon - 2008-04-29 12:43
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Good one, Peter - though I'm curious as to why the comma is outside the quotation marks in the tarot reader's line of dialogue.

Big story in the tiny word count - that's what I like to see.

Cheers

Karen
Nora Comment by: Nora - 2008-04-28 20:05
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Nice, Peter. Well played.
Boonrassi Comment by: Boonrassi - 2008-04-26 11:08
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marvelous...theres a lot of story in here.

the tarot reader said, turning over (the) three cards

//that could go.. only if you want another word for elsewhere i mean.
cool story.
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