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A quiet morn comes
whispering in
while she gazes at his face
so dear and
gently lit by the
faint glint
of the morning sun~
Sleepy eyed and love worn
from a passion filled night
She smiles softly
laying contented
in warm comfort
and love blossoming
at the dawn
of first light ...
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nice, nice play on words. I thought the title was 'love at first sight' and I didn't see it correctly until the last line. very creative spin on a cliche to make it fresh.
