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nonalienabductee
Niccole Segura
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United States, Pennsylvania/Ohio

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Warning Sign

The new tattoos hadn’t helped, he thought, sighing.  He really didn’t know how to make it any more obvious for them—studs in his eyebrows, shaved head, leather and metal draped over a muscular frame, the hunting knife in his back pocket.


Shaking his head at the folly of women, he threw the shovel into the bed of his truck.


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krademacher Comment by: krademacher Online- 2008-05-02 23:19
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yep, some women think they can "fix" the bad boy. Looks like this one fixes women instead. Nice twist at the end - and quite creepy. Cool!
BethShanFan Comment by: BethShanFan - 2008-04-30 19:19
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Creepy. Hahaha. That's hard to pull off with such a small amount of words. Good job.
karjon Comment by: karjon Online- 2008-04-29 12:47
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Yep - I'd lose 'really'. Other than that, I loved this, Niccole. The girls go for the bad guy, even when the bad guy is genuinely a bad guy.

Cheers

karen
Nora Comment by: Nora Online- 2008-04-28 20:12
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I was thinking serial killers usually keep a lower profile, but you have to figure some guys are just that ballsy. It reminds me of what a wise woman said. If he tells you he's no good, believe him.
flypaper Comment by: flypaper - 2008-04-28 07:27
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The thing your MC doesn't realize is some chicks dig bad dudes.

The story is complete and compelling.. kudos!

-C
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