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The clacking ducks break the peace
the sun breaks the dawn and cracks the invisible shell
of the day
The fog dances freely on the water
the air holds its breath still as the lifeless
A portal ,A paradise envisioned
As he cracks the ground with his solid foot steps
his lungs fill up the still air
A view of paradise
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This is beautiful imagery. We have "envisioned paradise," on our early morning excursions to the lake-fishing. Thanks, for reminding me to stop & take in all the glory.
