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Valerie
Valerie Stokes
United States, Ill, Burbank

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Neruda

There you are
my Song of Songs,
simple as winter lilac
spilling over the lip
of old cranberry glass,
hidden minor
in the melodic key
of my tempranillo
indulgence.

As oceans of possibility
become the catalyst
for a Winsor haze,
an open canvas
of artistic surrender,
let me dream
your bright Chilean nights,
climb the Andean slopes
to the shoulders of the world,
cross its foothills end to end
to hear your voice
that sang of wood and love
as you passed my way.

Perhaps you’ll come again
like the moth in first flight,
or crème brûlée
with its sugar-crisp crust
on the tip of my tongue,
or like sudden rain
that arrives in the blue hour
just before dusk.



Pablo Neruda, Chilean poet
1904-1973

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Comment by: - 2008-10-16 12:30
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I also love Neruda; I recently bought an antology by him, and there is no one who describes the inconscious delivered in dreams (or nightmares) like he does. The strange thing is that before purchasing Neruda's book, I had dreamt of him, even though I had never read him or thought of him. In the dream, the book's pages were made of living flesh.
Arley Comment by: Arley - 2008-09-15 06:39
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WOW! I have to confess my ignorance of Pablo Neruda, but if he were to read this he'd blush with gratitude. What a beautiful homage, Valerie — EXCELLENT!
alien Comment by: alien - 2008-04-28 05:22
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Totally took my breath away. There's nothing I can say that would improve it and to point out the bits I like the best would see me quoting almost the whole thing.
Everything is just beautiful.
DamienDread Comment by: DamienDread - 2008-04-27 09:01
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"your bright Chilean nights
climb the Andean slopes
to the shoulders of the world"

Kinda hott!! You got mad skillz, Val. I wouldn't change a thing about this piece.

D.Dread
ParchmentPoetry Comment by: ParchmentPoetry - 2008-04-26 18:49
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Beautiful. I love Winsor Blue. Nicely done. Janet
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