The man with no name
I asked him
where he came from.
He said:
'I come from my mother’s waters,
from my father’s well,
come grimed with brick dust,
stained by my brother’s blood,
scorned by accountants,
washed in sweat.
Horses see the dust of my passing,
snort their impatience.
Crows watch my shadow,
are familiar,
worms sense my steps
and are expectant.
My inheritance is clay
and offal from sumptuous kitchens.
I’m a conjuror of fishes.
My nostrils know the language
of faithless streets,
effluvium of mines.
I pass from farm to forge,
from mill to ship
and each one steals
the droplets of my sweat,
my hours, my loves
and no one calls
my name.'
I asked him
where he lived
but he was lost in the crowd.
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Much appreciated, Valerie. For me Pablo is second to none.
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Comment by: Valerie - 2008-04-25 01:53
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Very delightful and eloquent, and you mention one of my favorite poets.
Who could not be inspired by Neruda. Thank you for this. |
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Glad you find it earthy, Al, because that, of course, was one intention. That you felt it had an affinity with Native American writing warms me, because I was hoping it carried universality. I think the real inspiration of this came from Pablo Neruda, and his poem El Pueblo. That poem is ever present with me. But it is rare that I have much awareness of what I may be writing when I pen the first lines, or a specific intent. All that emerges as I go. Thanks
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Comment by: alcarty Online- 2008-04-24 15:03
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| Strong feel, Milner. Good rhythm. The origins of water, well and clay, and 'conjuror of fishes' reminds me of Native American writings, strongly connected to the earth. Beautiful piece. |
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Thanks, Heidi, Nicole, John. Such compliments are a delight to me.
milner |
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