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Sam S Sterling
Sam Sterling
United Kingdom

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For Sandy, (6.1.1947 - 21.4.1978)

Across my evening sky
The last bird was leaving
But then you knew
The storms of Winter had set in

I do not count the time
But thirty years has passed
Slightly less than your age
And it was time for you to go

You knew your love was not near you
Antipodean beach somewhere
Your heart, your daughter torn from you
Never knowing when they will return

And now at this late hour
You are so far away
Much farther than our islands
And your own lonely Fotheringay

My roving troubadour and minstrel
Hey that’s no way to say goodbye
You wrote your own autopsy?
No-ones owning what you see

Who knows where you go
Our friend our late night guest
As we sat round in candelit rooms
With an empty place reserved for you at table

In the summer I sat
Shivering as by Winter fire
Wondering where my fickle friends were
They knew it was time for them to go

Farewell, farewell I know you can hear
You lonely traveller you
The cold north wind it blows again
The winding road calls you

I lent you my time, I still philosophise
And still I bore people to tears
Yes I’m still red around the eyes
I tell them things no-one else hears

I am still here where I was
I have no thought of leaving
Your old cruel
Rain and the Wind

I stopped counting the time
When you left us
Crying my hours
Into years

And yes I still whistle the simplest of tunes
And beg the wild woods their pardon
For my true love is blown into every flower grown
And I still curate the garden

And if you ever should look for me
In body you’ll not me find
But my castle awaits your prescence
Inquire for Reynardine

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mmsiraj Comment by: mmsiraj - 2008-05-01 20:25
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A lovely tribute to a lovely woman. I have always turned to Sandy when feeling a little down and her soaring voice would lift me up and fill my heart with joy. Who knows where the time goes?
MitchellNoel Comment by: MitchellNoel - 2008-04-27 22:06
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yeah i agree with helao, appreciate it even more now. it's like a hand-knitted sweater.
helao Comment by: helao - 2008-04-27 21:19
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This is so beautiful, sam i am. I have a better appreciation of it now that you've explained its inspiration.
Sam S Sterling Comment by: Sam S Sterling - 2008-04-26 07:48
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Thanks for critting Vanessa and Mitch. In fairness I should point out that most of the lines here are odd inversions, combinations and idiosyncratic juxtapositions of lyrics, references to song titles, or other songs sung by the late Sandy Denny, and inevitably those are the more poetic lines. In turn, Sandy borrowed from a long immersion in traditional folk songs for some of her ideas. But yes it did come from the heart, many of her images were sadly prophetic, and I do miss her earthly prescence.
MitchellNoel Comment by: MitchellNoel - 2008-04-26 07:21
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certainly has a very dark, mystic feel to it. still trying to piece it all together.

Loved: And yes I still whistle the simplest of tunes
And beg the wild woods their pardon
For my true love is blown into every flower grown
And I still curate the garden

it's clear this was very heartfelt.
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