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ThoughtsOfDreams
Hannah Sharp
United Kingdom, Cambridge

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Simple Love

With body mass twice hers and a little more he worked her body, her limbs wrapped around him, not willing to let him go. With an unknown strength and without breaking contact, she flipped him onto his back and straddled him. Slowly she began to rock backwards and forwards on his manhood, filling her up and easing him to orgasm.
His form beneath her, his strength radiating, she felt safe as she collapsed on top of him.

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ThoughtsOfDreams Comment by: ThoughtsOfDreams - 2008-04-26 05:01
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Thanks, I wondered if it was a bit too simple, but it seems to work, and I couldn't seem to anything else with it therefore, it's finished!!
Sam S Sterling Comment by: Sam S Sterling - 2008-04-25 23:34
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Simple, yes but powerful.
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