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Lily Seabrooke
Australia

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Human

outdated
underdome expressions of charisma
taken with the bitterness of spite
danger, we're not all here
ask us each what we're doing
taken by the melodic enchantment of time
even with the pressures of now and when
don't, shouldn't listen, theres so much else we heard.

society
opresses connotations of the antithesis
come, see what we have created
ideologies of the same old ciricles
every time it's the same again, again, again
today it's the representation of 1184
you and I are yesterday, tommorow, and now

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lexemes Comment by: lexemes - 2008-05-02 04:51
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Wow. People have actually read it. I've had more response here than I ever have on post-your-work sites.
Oops, yes, didn't notice the spelling. Cheers! And thanks all for taking the time to comment.
sache Comment by: sache - 2008-04-27 07:48
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Really great... I loved this poem. It's a number one poem !!!
lilgoldenray Comment by: lilgoldenray Online- 2008-04-27 06:52
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I liked this... It made me feel dreamy... It almost has a futuristic edge to it for me... ummm last line... yesterday? or is the spelling supposed to be like that?
Randy Chavarria Comment by: Randy Chavarria - 2008-04-26 22:30
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As humans, we're a single organism. Our entire population of humans all around the planet is just one massive creature.
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