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| This makes perfect sense. I think it's fabulous. It pulls no punches. There's no verbal tap dancing here. It's direct and gorgeous. |
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I love like a river
That swells its banks
I will wash you off your feet
And drench you to the bone
I like the imagery of love being like a river that swells its banks, washes you off you feet and drenches you to the bone. Powerful imagery and well done! |
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| Yeah-Makes perfect sense. Great "spur of the moment" for us all to experience! |
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| Yes, it makes sense. I quite like it, actually. The simplicity really works for you here. |
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I understand it. Very well written and simplistic imagery. Creates a peaceful feeling through its style and flow.
well done. |
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