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DJHall
Donna Hall
United States, Illinois, Shiloh

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Imagine

Imagine

Imagine how life for millions of people would benefit from a more tolerable, empathetic, open minded society. I imagine how better off the world would be without racism of any form; for intolerance of another person’s religious views and pure evil to come to an end.

Think of it! A world of productive citizens living on this beautiful planet, and all of them free of judgments, jealousies, greed and resentment, which in turn ultimately lead to hate.

This idealized society of the world would be bound together, working for the greater good of all of mankind and striving to protect our dear, fragile Earth.

An influential area that would be the foundation for global unity is in the sphere of education. All children would be shown kindness, taught proper manners and instructed in household chores at home from the earliest age, instilling in them strong morals for empathy and a desire for self-discipline. In primary grades the schools would include mandatory subjects such as Geography, Culture, World History, Science and World
Languages, as well as the tried and true Three R’s: Reading, Writing and Arithmetic. As these children grew strong and matured they would then be challenged with more intellectual topics such as Ethics/Morals, Politics, Theology, Environmental Issues, Psychology, and Social Sciences. I may be dreaming, but by the end of high school these children would have been educated in at least three languages, and have attained an
appreciation of cultures across the globe, gained knowledge of not just the United States government history, but also a clearer understanding of the politics of other countries.

Perhaps with this start, all the varied societies around the world would be more open and accepting of each other’s values, both religiously and politically and have a more meaningful, honest and productive communication with one another.


Awards would be given more for competence in the area of academics, as a motivation to produce more great thinkers, rather than placing such importance on sports. Naturally, in this idealized world, the media would concentrate their efforts on highlighting those events such as academic achievement, discoveries in science and successful charities, rather than placing celebrities on a pedestal. Criminals would not receive more than 10
minutes of airtime, just enough to get the word out. I say make public the names and faces of great thinkers, problem solvers and profound artists on the front pages of magazines and newspapers!

Time would be more well spent on working on solutions for world peace, to end global warming, reducing poverty and advancing efforts to cure fatal diseases, rather than dreaming of ways to make more money to pay for homes that are too large only to impress. People would gain respect in society because of his value in the community via volunteer work, raising generations of moral citizens, etc., rather than the kind of car he
drives. Less time would be spent sitting in front of the tube watching reality shows. Think of how bored we would be, watching those sorts of inane television programs, if we were a more intellectual humanity.

Don’t get me wrong, along with all this studying and knowledge will come a greater need for relaxing and down time, and thus exercise would be incorporated as the normal course of the day, second nature so to speak. Be it a walk, game of sports, dance, yoga, treadmill, gym or what have you. The need to participate in such an activity would be so ingrained in the minds of the people of this society, and looked at as a way to refresh the mind, spirit and stay healthy, rather than merely a way to loose weight. Remember, this is a more accepting society therefore there is no desire to pass judgment on those who are carrying extra pounds. Of course the Arts would be enjoyed with great appreciation and pleasure. True artistry would be regarded with respect and admiration, held in high esteem, but not too loftily.

Imagine if all the people of the world could garner such an education and realize the true purpose of their short existence on Earth.

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Wildefriend Comment by: Wildefriend - 2008-05-12 15:38
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A wonderful idealistic view of the world, which I like. However, implicit in your words but basically unsaid is the real crux of the matter--the joy of learning.

For example, learning about music. It joins together many different areas: visual art, literature, history, mythology, and of course music. If someone could impart to children the joy of learning about those ideas and how it binds people together from many cultures, then one could begin to make headway.
Jorbian Comment by: Jorbian - 2008-04-29 17:34
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I must say that I like it. Your ideas are prestented in a clever and non-traditional format and very well I must say. I ideally would like to say that I could almost agree with such things that you have said, though the realist in me would say that this essay seemed like an idealistic rant, but it is a masterful one if it is that.

Perhaps it is misclassified? I am not sure. It has high artistic merit, but that is much higher then its acedemic merit. That is the one thing wrong with it, that its artistic merit far out weighs its acedemic merit. I don't know if it is how my mind has been posioned with schooling to think that an essay is an acedemic work or not, but I will have to say that it was very moving, thus giving it very high artistic merit.
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