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Rachel Ausura
United States, va, newport news

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Forgotten Beauty

The sound of telephones ringing, televisions blazing, and cars honking resound throughout the air, and fill our heads with constant noise. Somewhere, covered by the modern noise that pollutes our surroundings, is an age old sound. The sound that most of us have forgotten as we rush through our busy, distraction filled days. But it has not abandoned us. It waits, lingering in the fields, forest, and seas, waiting for us to draw near and remember its beauty.

The sound is the simple serenity of nature in all of its effortlessness. It is in the wind that stirs the trees, the salty roar of the ocean’s waves breaking on cliffs, and even in the innocent chirp of a sparrow. They all contain something that our endless supply of modern resources does not. It is a simple, uncomplicated peace.

It is hard to believe that all the wonder and beauty of the natural world can be so easily disregarded and forgotten by the majority of people in our country. They become so consumed by work, school, and the abundance of technological distractions that they forget all that nature has to offer. From text messaging to ipods, we are able to supply ourselves with constant entertainment and distractions. There is hardly ever a moment when people are forced to be silent or to be still.

Noise is everywhere and most have become so accustomed to this invasion of the senses that they are not even bothered by it. Some are so used to it that they actually feel uncomfortable when the noise is not present. There is a sense of urgency in almost every American. There is a sense that we need to be in constant motion or be engaged in something. And one activity is usually not enough for most people. For instance, the majority of family dinners take place while the television blazes away in the background.

Whatever happened to relaxing evenings on the front porch or peaceful walks in the park while the eclectic sounds of nature sooth your senses? Whatever happened to listening? These things may seem foreign to many Americans. We have become so engaged and fascinated with the latest technologies that we forget the things that were already here. We forget the sense of freedom that washes over us when the salty air hits our face. We forget the utter sense of calm, simple peacefulness that the sun’s rays pour down on us, or the sense of awe that comes from gazing up at the infinite starry sky. These should not be forgotten, but treasured instead. So maybe, in this increasingly complex and technological world, we are losing much more then we are gaining.

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rollingbolus Comment by: rollingbolus - 2008-06-04 19:59
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very true and very well written

'Some are so use to it' - should be 'used to'

I really enjoyed reading this and hope to read more

thanks

Dominic
mattarnold Comment by: mattarnold - 2008-05-11 19:09
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I concur entirely, but would have to add that there are many of us who do appreciate "the simple serenity of nature", agreed though that it is a unfortunate minority.
nice closing advice: "These should not be forgotten, but treasured instead."
Sam S Sterling Comment by: Sam S Sterling - 2008-04-28 11:52
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Oh Bravo! and good to see you back. Sadly I have to report that you could extend your vision to almost any part of the English speaking world, not just the States. Any Saturday here you can see people crawling like ants desperately spending money they havent got on things they dont really need. But I dont share the pessimism, other ppl are fighting back and rediscovering the joys you so eloquently describe. Its a complex area. personally Im very grateful for the technology which saved my life a few years ago, but as you rightly point out here, we also need to consider just what our lives are being saved for? One reaction I had was to stop wearing a watch. I dont think Ive actually been late for anything since, I manage somehow. In the pub a colleague flashed a 6000 quid Rolex at me and said 'what do you think of that! I flashed my bare wrist at him bearing only my IV scar and said 'what do you think of that!' LOL. We both share the same time/space.

Your piece is very thought provoking, would like to hear more.
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