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MsWizard
Alicia Wizard
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United States, WA, Seattle

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The Nighttime Is the Right Time

You know
the night time
Is the right time
to be
with the one you love~
It’s not the daytime
It’s the playtime
In the dark
when two lovers
Desire
To conspire
To commit
The deed
and fill the needs
that only
a warm sultry night
and torrid skin
creating sparks
in the dark
can fulfill …

The daytime is sweet
so chaste and complete
with handholding
Smiles
and laughter
But when
the nighttime falls
and dark natures call
out in the night
for satiation
of the hunger
they're after …

Hot moans
Groans
and cries in the night
Scratches
Deep kisses
Ecstatic bites
Darkest desires
Unleashed
as inhibitions
take flight …

Harder
Deeper
Yes right there!
the scent of sex
permeates the air
Hot love speak sighed
into lover’s ears
Orgasmic pleasure
turns into tears
rapturously
trickling down
contented faces
masked in glorious smiles
while hands slowly
Stroke
Move
And
Smooth
over skin softened
and saturated
with warm
liquid desires
as waxed witnesses
flicker wildly
In the dark ….

Oh the
Daytime is sweet
but it’s the
Night time ..
Thats the
Right time …
…Yeah …
to be …
with
the one
you love …

(Thank you Ray Charles....)

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MsWizard Comment by: MsWizard Online- 2008-05-01 23:29
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Thank you Matt...and yes I agree (She says this as she prints it out to put with her favorites)
mattarnold Comment by: mattarnold - 2008-05-01 17:09
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this one has a pounding intensity. would be a strong performance piece...
MsWizard Comment by: MsWizard Online- 2008-04-29 08:07
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Glad you liked it Danah!
Danahfaren Comment by: Danahfaren - 2008-04-29 05:36
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That indeed was a fun read! Thanks for sharing!
MsWizard Comment by: MsWizard Online- 2008-04-28 20:44
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"cracking"...I like it! Thank you Mike...I really appreciate your reading and commenting....
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