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MsWizard
Alicia Wizard
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United States, WA, Seattle

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The Arrival

Cherry blossoms
Swirling gently on the ground
Dancing to the rhythm
Of a soft breeze
While pale gray clouds
Part
As the glory of the sun
Warms me
Under the gaze of
Blue skies
Shining out of
Blue eyes
smiling
And I am joyous
That
Spring …
Has come upon me
…At last …

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MsWizard Comment by: MsWizard Online- 2008-05-07 07:18
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Thank you Danah...actually "spring" is a metaphor....
Danahfaren Comment by: Danahfaren - 2008-05-07 01:40
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This describes the exact feeling I have had every single day for the past two weeks that spring has taken over Germany ... :-)
Lovely poem!
MsWizard Comment by: MsWizard Online- 2008-05-06 07:29
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Thank you Jarful....I loved writing this one...
Jarfuls Comment by: Jarfuls - 2008-05-06 06:13
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This piece brought a smile to my face upon reading it. I had images of flowers, the suns warmth, the newness of the earth. I really liked this poem.
MsWizard Comment by: MsWizard Online- 2008-05-05 22:28
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Thank you Kevin....actually spring is a metaphor in this piece...*smile*...
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