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| I thought so. Nice one. Goodnight. |
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Comment by: Jorbian - 2008-05-21 23:08
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| That is exactly what I was trying to say actually. |
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| sometimes we can never get what we know we need out of life. even if it is in our reach, its too scary. |
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Comment by: Jorbian - 2008-05-01 15:47
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I guess you are right about the repetition.
And as far as to what I was refering to, it was meant to be totally unclear what I was refering to. What I was really refering to I am not even sure of, but I meant several far more innocent things. |
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it's kinda of vague.
i got erectile dysfunction out of it.
"It is clear
it is clear
but one thing
what I need
I just can't
I need too
but just can't
I can't (get it up)"
you have a lot of repetition in your line breaks. this waters down the affect of the line breaks imo. |
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