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Istari97
John Geyer
United States, PA

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Beauty

Do Man’s eyes distort that which he wishes to see?
Can the mind of earthly man perceive true beauty?

For to one the budding rose of a thorny bush
may prick the gentle heart with its askew beauty.

The blushing sun over the far horizon borne
can also bathe waking lands and renew beauty.

Simply because man has dominated this earth
does not imply that beasts do not value beauty.

A hawk, its wings spread wide across the open sky,
flows through cloudy oceans and calls that, too, beauty.

Or the tireless ant, with its grand mountains of loam,
labors endlessly so as to pursue beauty.

And who is to state that beings under the wave
do not breathe in and out that vast blue beauty?

A lie it would be to declare man sole holder
of loveliness—for such claims would undo beauty.

For man must put aside his superior view
and gaze within and without, and into beauty.

But who am I but Jeryhn, a homely human
of twenty, to address such a Lady as you, Beauty?

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Randy Chavarria Comment by: Randy Chavarria - 2008-05-01 01:53
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Ahhhh, brilliant poem. The last part confuses me, as you've capitalized the "L" in lady. First I was content in thinking this poem was just an elaborate way to say that a specific woman was more beautiful than anything any mortal can truly express, given the small word "beauty". But with my paranoid mind, even the smallest gestures conjure thoughts, as with that "L", maybe you're speaking of something far greater than you couldn't label as beautiful, for your impotence as a human won't allow it. Brilliant write either way.
MsWizard Comment by: MsWizard Online- 2008-04-29 08:46
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Lovely....very clever the way you used beauty at the end of each stanza...I enjoyed this immensely~
Jarfuls Comment by: Jarfuls - 2008-04-29 08:46
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Absolutely wonderful to read. I smiled upon finding this poem, and nod in agreement.

Simply because man has dominated this earth
does not imply that beasts do not value beauty. <<< This was my favorite part.
Jarfuls Comment by: Jarfuls - 2008-04-29 08:46
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Absolutely wonderful to read. I smiled upon finding this poem, and nod in agreement.

Simply because man has dominated this earth
does not imply that beasts do not value beauty. <<< This was my favorite part.
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