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It's not fair
that I know
to be true
and that's it
That's all true
but it's it
among my store
and just it
for the rest
I'm not sure
I know that
but just that
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has a nice flow; couldnt really descern what the inspiration for this was?
well executed tho I for one couldnt really see a "message"
would love to see more attempts.
I would like to know how well I did at creating the effect that I was attempting to useing my three word lines. This has lately been an obsession of mine. Monometer and dimeter though I would love to try it, don't seem to work. So at the minimum, how is it?
