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Just three words
and that's it
nothing more
just the three
but the three
what are they
I don't know
just the three
Three words only
I have three
three a line
three a page
What three though
just you guess
I don't know
just you guess
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I like this one a lot, trimeter or not it makes the reader have to think of the three words which are pretty obvious, its nice when a poem makes the reader get involved in it. Thanks for sharing
A bit more explicite with the way that I want to present my ideas in my attempt at 'trimeter.' I am attempting to hone this where it is a better pattern between troches and Dactyls. I am not sure about this though. I am interested in input, if you can please read my other example of my 'trimeter' as I am dubbing it.
