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Deby
Aoife De Buitléar
Ireland, Dublin

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Don't let go

Hold on, hold on and don’t let go
Why would I let go? There is no reason to.
If the stars were falling from the sky
And the oceans rose above the shores
That is still no reason why
I would ever let go of you

I love you, I love you
Words spoken so much
The feeling grows more
With each touch
Don'y leave me don’t leave me
Why would i do that?
I love you so much
There’s no turning back

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KairiHimuro Comment by: KairiHimuro - 2008-05-11 12:16
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ah,, i like it! alot!!
lilgoldenray Comment by: lilgoldenray Online- 2008-04-30 13:19
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aweeee this is really touching... I like it alot... It's short and it has a kind of sing song feel to it...ummm "Done leave me don’t leave me" did you mean "don't" instead of "Done"? just wondering...
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